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Post by kairo Thu Mar 24, 2011 7:07 pm

Suden is a desert town in the far east. It is very old styled, farms and windmills all around. It is very secluded from the big cities, the only news coming from travelers and traders that pass by.

Kairo walked into Suden, his hands in his pockets. He hadn't been here since he buried his father in the graveyard. He walked down the streets, a few people working out in their yards and on the farms waving at him. He waved back and kept walking, determined not to make conversation. He walked into the graveyard nearby and found his fathers grave. "Hey dad. Long time no see." He stood there looking at the grave.
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Post by kotaro7914 Thu Mar 24, 2011 8:14 pm

Kotaro walked into the town, his head turning from side to side. "So this is Kairo's home town." Kotaro saw many friendly faces. "Now where Kairo? I hope he has changed his mind."
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Post by kairo Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:56 am

“Dad, I know that in the past I led to complete disapointment. But, this will finally clear my head. I am going to be buried next to you and we may not be together in the other world, but you will be with me in my heart.” Kairo starts crying as he sits next to the grave, waiting for the moment Kotaro arrives.
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Post by kotaro7914 Fri Mar 25, 2011 12:58 am

Kotaro heard sobbing, and walked into the graveyard. He saw Kairo crying and remained silent.
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Post by kairo Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:07 am

“I had never thought of dying like this dad. I thought I would die happy and old, instead I die young. The last conversation we had you said I would be destined for greatness. Instead, people hate me. I don't have friends. And I never met the girl of my dreams, a stone cold killer, just like me, but with a heart instead of a hated background.” Kairo spots Kotaro. “I am not ready to die yet. Wait a few hours for people to come.”


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Post by kotaro7914 Fri Mar 25, 2011 8:49 am

Kotaro nodded. “I hoped you changed your mind. 6 hours ill wait.”
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Post by kairo Fri Mar 25, 2011 4:59 pm

6 hours passed and Kairo stood up. No one had arrived. He wasn't surprised. He had made many enemies, no friends. No one to help him in his time of need. The closest one to that was Renee, and he had flat out ignored her. "Follow me." Kairo led Kotaro to an open area away from the town, so they could fight without attracting unwanted attention. "Kotaro, I won't be holding back. If you don't try to kill me, I'll kill you. So be prepared to kill me, or lose your life." Kairo entered the stance of the Black Talon Mercenary group he had been in.
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Post by kotaro7914 Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:02 pm

Kotaro said nothing, he just stood there hands in his pockets and facing Kairo. He didn't enter a stance and remained silent. If he began talking, he would end up trying to talk Kairo out of this, but Kairo had made it clear. He would kill Kotaro if he didn't defend himself. "Let's begin."
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Post by kairo Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:04 pm

Kairo darted at Kotaro, his sword seeming to fly from it's seath and into his hands. He slammed his hand into the ground, dragging it while he approached Kotaro, the steel in the rock forming a ball in his hand.
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Post by kotaro7914 Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:08 pm

Kotaro jumped over Kairo. As he passed over him, he took out 'One Winged Angel' and brought it down in a powerful downward strike.
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Post by kairo Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:10 pm

Kairo dodged the strike and raised the steel ball in the air. The steel the ball was made of split into thousands of pieces, each one sharp as his sword. They streaked toward Kotaro, whistling as they traveled.
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Post by kotaro7914 Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:28 pm

Kotaro placed the buster sword blade first in the ground, then placed his hand on the blade. As the shards hit the blade, they were electrically charged and sent back toward Kairo. Kotaro then removed the sword and rushed Kairo, his body a blur.
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:44 am

Kairo moved his sword in position ready to block the upcoming blow.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:45 am

Kotaro's body suddenly appeared in front of Kairo, blade already on it's way toward his torso.
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:47 am

Kairo moving faster than light, evades the attack and swings the blade towards Kotaro's back.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:51 am

Kotaro quickly swung the buster sword behind him, blocking the attack. He then kicked Kairo away, instantly entering a defensive stance.
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:55 am

Kairo gets up from the attack. Running towards Kotaro, he goes ready for his strike. Stopping to grasp his chest, Kairo begins to cough up blood. "*cough*". Then Kairo's eyes begin to tear out blood, from all the blood he starts becoming blind. seeing nothing but blurs.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 2:59 am

Kotaro was about to block Kairo's attack, then saw his sudden heart attack and bloody tears. He said nothing but exited his stance.
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:03 am

Kairo recovers. He charges toward Kotaro. Then stops, he clasps on to hs chest and coughs up blood. Then his tear ducts cry blood. So much blood that it makes him partly blind. All he can see is blurs.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:07 am

"Kairo, you need to stop!" Kotaro sheathed the sword.
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:09 am

"No, come at me now." Kairo began to attack Kotaro with his blade.
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:20 am

Kotaro sighed and punched Kotaro in the face. "Enough!"
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:22 am

"No." Kairo transmuted a spike out of the ground and threw it at Kotaro. "I will die the way I wantd to."
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Post by kotaro7914 Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:23 am

Kotaro grabbed the spike as it came at him, throwing it to the side. "Your too weak to even use alchemy!"
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Post by kairo Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:26 am

Kotaro pulled out his hidden blade and started walking towards him slowly. He held out his hand as he walked slower and slower. Eventually he stopped in a pace. His heart has beating so fast it can be heard from a mile away. Then silence, as Kairo fell to the ground. Eyes wide open, blood began seeping from his mouth.
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