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Raven Adams

Post by MaxieA98 on Sun Jun 19, 2011 8:04 pm

AA Username: MaxieA98
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Name: Raven Adams
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Weight: 125 lb
Height: 6 ft 5 in
Hair: black with white bangs
Eyes: red
Race: Ishvalan
Alliance: Resistance
Job: civilian job
Power/Weapon: Black Katana Sword
Personality: Kind, caring, laid back, doesn't care for war.
History: Remembers waking up in the middle of the desert, with his sword next to him.
Other: No family


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Re: Raven Adams

Post by Yoyo on Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:04 pm

You post character applications in the application area, not the approved character area.

You need some sort of history. How he lost his memory, where he came from, if he has a permanent inability to remember anything, what he's done since he woke up with amnesia, etc. No being lazy and not making a history.

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Re: Raven Adams

Post by SamSeven on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:32 pm

My bad! Not theirs, I swear.

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Re: Raven Adams

Post by Yoyo on Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:38 pm

M'kay. For future reference, we should all probably post that we've approved it so we know it's not just a mistake or something. *nods*

Either way, there needs to be some sort of history. He may not remember anything about his past, but there's still something there he remembers. At the very least waking up in the middle of Central in his underwear or something.

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